Blackwood's Edinburgh Magazine, Volume 59, No. 368, June 1846
Part 5
"Now Pentecost, the feast, by some Call'd 'merry Whitsuntide,' was come! The fields show'd brave, with kingcups dight, And hawthorns kercheft were in white: Her low-breathed lute the fresh'ning rill Unto the waken'd woods 'gan trill; Whilst, hid in leafy bower remote, The cuckoo tuned his herald-note; The meads were prankt in gold and green, And 'leetel fowles' of liveried sheen, Their pipes with JUBILATE! swelling, From bush and spray were philomelling-- The breeze came balmy from the west, And April, harness'd in her best, The laughing sun led forth to see-- When Noble (lion-king was he, And sceptre sway'd o'er bird and beast,) Held ancient ways, and kept the feast, The trumpets clang'd loud proclamation-- The couriers coursed throughout the nation-- Full many a Brave and many a Bold Came hastening in troops untold."
The German translator here keeps precisely within the same compass of fourteen lines with his "first type," while the Londoner has one-half more. But this is not the main difference. The German is neater and more natural, and nearer the spirit as well as the letter of his model. All the trash in the new reproduction about hawthorns "kercheft in white," the low-breathed lute of the rill trilling, the cuckoo and his herald note, the 'leetel fowles' swelling and philomelling, and April harnessed in her best, are mere frippery sewed on by the reproducer, to make the venerable old garment look finer in the eyes of his co-Cockneys.
We next give the two translations of that part of the poem which represents the Cock's complaints against Reynard, for killing his daughter, and which is supposed to give so accurate a representation of the form of process in the Middle Ages in an accusation of murder.
SOLTAU.
"Gray scarce had done, when Chanticleer The Cock in mourning did appear; Two sons accompanied their sire, Like him in funeral attire, With hoods of crape and torches lighted, And doleful lays they both recited. Two others follow'd with a bier; Mournful and slowly they drew near, With heartfelt sighs and deepest groan, Their fav'rite sister to bemoan. "The Cock in tears the throne approach'd, And thus his sad harangue he broach'd: 'My Liege, have pity on a man, The most distressed of his clan, Who, with his children here before You, Is come, for vengeance to implore You On Reynard, who, with fell design, Hath done great harm to me and mine. When hoary Winter left the plain, And Spring smiled on the world again, When leaves were budding, daisies springing, And tuneful birds in thickets singing, The sun at dawn of morning found me With my young family around me; Ten sons and fourteen daughters fair, Breathing with joy the genial air, All of one breed, and full of life, Brought up by my good prudent wife. Protected by a massy wall And six bold mastiffs, stout and tall, They lived, in spite of Reynard crafty, Within a cloister-yard in safety. "But lo! our enemy contrived Our joy, alas! should be short-lived. In hermit's garb the traitor came, With letters, written in your name, Where strictest orders were express'd, To keep peace between bird and beast. He said, he scorn'd the joys of sense, And led a life of penitence, To expiate his former guilt, And streams of blood, which he had spilt; He vow'd, in future he would eat No poultry, nor forbidden meat. "All joyful, to my little crew, To tell the happy news I flew, That Reynard friar's garments wore, And was our enemy no more. Now for the first time we did venture Out of our gate. A dire adventure Awaited us; for whilst we stray'd And sported on a sunny glade, Reynard, conceal'd below a bush, Upon us suddenly did rush; One of my hopeful sons he slew, And of my fairest daughters two.-- Five only out of twenty-four Are left; the rest he did devour. My daughter Rake-up, on this bier, Slain by the murderer, lies here; He bit her neck off yesterday-- Revenge her death, my liege, I pray.' "'Sir Gray,(quoth Noble,) did you hear? Fine things of th' hermit-fox appear. Was't thus, that with his fasts he meant it? Sure as I live he shall repent it! "'Good Cock, we've heard your mournful tale, And we your daughter's fate bewail; Thus, first of all, we'll see the honour Of funeral rites bestow'd upon her; Next with our Council we shall further Consult, how to revenge this murther.'"
NAYLOR.
"He ceased; and scarce a sand had run When Chanticleer and all his clan Appear'd in court: right in the van A pullet's corse accompanied, 'Clept Dem'selle Scratchclaw ere she died; By Reynard's bite decapitated-- This wise the tidings were related. Close to the throne the Cock drew nigh: Deep anguish dimm'd his upturn'd eye: Two little Bantams, right and left, Wept bitter tears, as birds bereft. Sir Flapwing was of high degree, As fine a bantling as you'd see 'Twixt Amsterdam and Paris, he. Sir Strain-neck was the other 'clept, And, like the first one, proudly stept. Before them each a torch they bear, Alike the same; for twins they were. Young Cocks yet twain bare up the pall, And help'd the wail with voices small. Then Chanticleer, before the King Commenced, in tones deep harrowing: 'Ah, gracious Lord and King! give ear To my disastrous tale! The tear Of pity shed on us who stand For justice, suppliants at your hand. Sire! thus it chanced;--The frosted beard Of Winter scarce had disappear'd; Scarce had the thorny brake put by Its hosiery of fleece, and I As happy felt as though a chicken; About me, strutting, crowing, picking, In comeliness my little ones: I counted up ten stalwart sons; Of daughters, too, a wondrous store,-- Plump Ortolans, and full a score. My dame, the thoughtful prudent Hen, Had train'd their youth beneath her ken All virtues cardinal to practise, Best learned from mothers, as the fact is. Our house was in the convent yard, High wall'd around: six dogs stood guard;-- All kept for our peculiar care, By night and day to shield us there. Now, gracious Liege! mark what I tell. Reynard, (the knave!) with cockle-shell And pilgrim's staff, wellworn, appears, Bearing a packet: as he nears, I note your royal seal, and read Announcement of the truce decreed: No more, he said, he played the royster, But sought repentance in a cloister: Observed the rule o' th' strictest sect, His sins to purge with sure effect; Whereby myself might to the end My life secure and fearless spend. Said he, 'flesh diet I have sworn Never to touch from night to morn.'-- Unto my children all, I stated The royal message, then related How Reynard had assumed the cowl, And left off hankering after fowl. Myself I led them far and wide, When lo! the Fox's guile defied My anxious cares: in that same hour He'd mark'd a victim for his power! Perdu behind a bush he lay, And took, before mine eyes, his prey! The best of all my brood he seized, And ate her up. The morsel pleased His scoundrel maw--'twas dainty meat-- And soon he sought another treat.-- Full four-and twenty hopeful chicks As e'er peck'd corn from out fresh ricks Were mine,--and now, as I'm alive, The villain's kill'd them all but five! Pity, O King! my sorrowing tale: Grant succour in this hour of wail! But yesterday, the huntsman's cry Surprised him in the act to fly With Scratchclaw's body, which you see Kill'd by his murd'rous tooth--ah me! 'Tis here as witness of my woe-- Oh that my hardhap to your heart may go!' Enraged, the King: 'Sir Badger, ho! The monk your uncle (troth!) doth know To keep his fast,--the holy man!-- Match me the like of this who can? What need of further question here? Draw nigh and listen, Chanticleer! Ourself your daughter dead will see Entomb'd with all solemnity Of dirge and mass, in her last slumber, And vigils also without number. This done, from these our lieges true We'll crave their help and counsel too, Touching the murder and the vengeance due.' To Bruin then the King thus spake: 'Bruin! look well you undertake This journey with dispatch--'Tis I, Your Sov'reign, calls upon you--fly! Be wise and wary: Reynard's guile Is practised in each crafty wile.'"
Neither of the translators is here very good, and Naylor is perhaps as near hitting the nail on the point (to use the phrase of a friend of ours of the Fogie Club) as his competitor. He still gives us, however, a great many silly superfluities, though some of them we have ventured to cut out.
Finally, as our readers may begin to think they have enough of this, we shall close our comparative view by some quotations from the Wager of Battle, by which the Wolf and the Fox ultimately terminate their disputes.
SOLTAU.
"The trumpets then began to sound, And next the wardens did appear, And call'd the champions forth, to swear. Growler advanced, his oath to take; He swore, that Reynard was a rake, A murd'rer, and a treach'rous wight, For which assertion he would fight. "Then Reynard in his turn did swear, That Growler was a perjurer; To prove his charge, he did defy him, Because he basely did belie him. "The wardens then admonish'd both, To fight with honour and good troth. This being done, the lists were clear'd, Where both the combatants appear'd. "The combatants with equal rage And fury now began t'engage. The Wolf, by dint of strength and art, Attack'd the Fox with leap and start; But Reynard, being shrewd and light, Avoided him by cunning flight, And while he ran, he did not fail To water well his rugged tail. When Growler meant to hold him fast, He nimbly veer'd about at last, And with his tail the dust and dirt He full into his face did flirt. Whilst Growler rubb'd his eyes with pain, Reynard his flirts renew'd again, Till Growler was quite spent at last, And by the throat he held him fast. 'Sir Wolf,(he said,)if heretofore Poor lambs and kids you oft have tore, It is high time now to repent, Before your last breath you have spent, And with contrition to behave, If you would wish your soul to save.' "In this provoking style he spoke, Striving his enemy to choke; But Growler was for him too strong, And broke loose from his hold erelong; Though ere he got out of his jaws, Reynard gall'd him with teeth and claws; One of his eyes was almost out, And streams of blood ran down his snout. "As soon as he his blood did view, At Reynard in a rage he flew; He got him under, and his paw He seized, and held it in his jaw. 'You caitiff, your last hour has come, (Said he,) and you'll meet with your doom. 'T shall not avail you now, to shear, To flirt, kick up a dust, and smear. I'll make you pay for all your lies, And for the damage of my eyes.' "Whilst Growler kept hold of the paw, Sly Reynard with his other claw Seiz'd him in such a tender part, That it made Growler howl with smart, And forced him soon to ope his jaw, And to let go the imprison'd paw. Reynard now tugg'd, and pull'd, and tore, And made the Wolf spit blood and gore; He brought him senseless to the ground, And dragg'd him through the lists around. "When this his wife and friends perceived, They were much terrified and grieved. Then pray'd the king to use his right, And to suspend the bloody fight. "The king took their request to heart, And bade the champions straight to part, To whom the leopard and the ounce, As wardens, did his will announce. "Reynard," they said, "the king has sent To let you know 'tis his intent To put an end to all your strife. He bids you to spare Growler's life; For 'twould be a pity after all, If either of you both should fall. Meantime all, who are present, say That you at last have won the day.'"
NAYLOR.
"Hark! hark! the tuckets sound on high! 'He comes! Sir Isengrim!' they cry. The Wolf and all his kith and kin Approach in long array! The din Their multitudinous trampling made Resounded like a cavalcade Of mailed warriors on the march, Or winds that, through a wood of larch, The groaning branches swing and sway, And thunder out and roar alway. Still forward they their course observe, Neither to right nor left they swerve; But onward to the lists the band March up, then halt, and take their stand. When first the Wolf--'I here repeat The Fox a villain is, and cheat! I brand him murderer to boot! Adulterer! with heart, as soot Is, black! that solemn truth do I Wager on hazard of this die!' Then Reynard--'What the Wolf alleges Are lies! I'll prove it! and my pledge is The victory, which I by battle, This day will gain o'er yon _base cattle_!' The marshal of the lists then cried: 'The right shall by the might be tried, What fair and fetis is, that do! The god of battles prosper you!' He said, then towards the side withdrew. The rest soon follow'd; save the two, Who occupied alone the space, And stood for action face to face! The marshal now, with plumed hat on, Beside the barrier stood; his baton Of office thrice he whirled aloft; And not a soul or spake or _cough'd_. 'Oyez! oyez! oyez!' he cried, 'Will each of ye the issue bide?' 'We will!' they answer. 'Are ye ready?' 'Yes!' 'Yes!'--'Then LAISSEZ ALLER!' said he. Reynard address'd him then to fight; And Isengrim commenced to bite The air, and show'd his teeth, by way Of prelude to the coming fray; Next, rear'd his snout, and brought the jowl To Reynard's level; one loud howl He utter'd, ere he crouch'd, then bounded To where the Fox, no whit astounded By noises so unknightly, stood; For raising lofty as he could His voice, the foe the terms defied. 'Come on,' he resolutely cried. The struggle was commenced! The sternest There present felt it was right earnest; The Fox, as smaller of the two, Was favourite; and when he drew '_First claret_,' at that _tapping_ action The mob express'd their satisfaction; Exclaiming, '_go it! ten to one Upon the varmint little 'un!'_ By this time had Dan Phoebus clomb The summit of his glowing dome, And Isengrim his power to feel Began, which made the Wolf to reel. He mourn'd his hapless want of claws, His teeth, too, batter'd by the paws Of Reynard, woefully he miss'd; For grasp'd within his well-clench'd fist, The Fox a flint stone firmly held, With which he deftly aim'd and fell'd One after t'other every fang, Till down his weasand, at each bang, Successively they flew. This thing To Isengrim _so punishing_, Set him forthwith to calculate The odds on his _superior weight_, How best it might the foeman tell on-- Which done, he threw himself pele-mele on The Fox, to bear him down intending. But Reynard saw: instead of spending His strength in any vain endeavour 'Gainst Isengrim, he waited ever Upon the Wolf--so this time he Perceived the rushing enemy, And as he near'd him slipp'd aside. The Wolf came on with awful stride, But meeting not with Reynard there, He buffeted the yielding air Instead, found no impediment, His force him to the barrier sent, Where toppling heels o'er head he went With emphasis--a heavy _flop_, '_My eyes,' the mob cry, 'what a whop!_' Then Reynard to the Wolf stepp'd close, And said aloud, 'How lik'st the dose? Friend Isengrim, there yet may be For pardon opportunity Ere thou departest, only speed ye, Or else the wandering ghosts, I rede ye, Of all the lambs and kids thou'st slain Will haunt thee through the wide champain Whither thou'rt ebbing fast, down yonder; But softly, is he kill'd I wonder?' For so it seem'd. Through that vast crowd A pin drop had resounded loud. Thought Reynard, he has got it now! I'll rest awhile, for any how If he the fight again begin I'll try the trick upon his shin. Stunn'd lay the prostrate Wolf quite still And stiff, nor moved a peg until His squires, much fearing for his life, Rush'd in, preceded by his wife; And lifting him upon their knees, They gave him _salts to make him sneeze_, Which thirteen times he did repeat, Then started lively to his feet. A feeling of relief ran through The crowd, whose visages look'd rue, To think their fun forestall'd and spent By that untoward accident. Again the tuckets sound--again The dauntless heroes give the rein To their revenge. The Fox now charges The Wolf, and both his eyes enlarges, With _right and lefters planted well_, And _punches on the nob that tell_; So hard and fast the bangs and thumps, You'd thought that firemen at their pumps Were working-- ----crafty Reynard quick Deliver'd him a villain kick Right in the midriff--down he dropp'd! Like some tall forester when lopp'd By stroke of woodman's axe. 'Twas all He spake, not groaned in his fall, Outstretch'd upon the ground there lay The Wolf--he'd fainted clean away. No herald's voice, no tucket's cheer, The noble Isengrim could hear; An all but victor lately, now Prostrated, palsied by one blow; Nay, not so, by a kick unknightly, Foul aim'd, yet for the mark too rightly, Alas, its only merit that! But what cared Reynard, it was pat, And told, and did its business well; 'Twas every thing desirable. The fight was o'er--the Wolf dragg'd out More dead than living, 'mid the shout Of rabble, whilst the heralds cry 'Largesse,' the others 'Victory.' The air with noise and din resounded. The friends of Isengrim, confounded, Slunk off, whilst Reynard's stay'd; indeed The very people who agreed The Fox's death a public good Had been, now 'mong the foremost stood, By acclamations to attest Regard outheroding the rest!"
We have not the heart to criticise this last and greatest effort of the reproducer. Its slang speaks for itself, and certainly carries along with it an undeniable "certificate of origin".
A good translation of any thing is perhaps an impossibility. But it must be confessed, that the attempt of the German foreigner is highly creditable to him, and, with a little amendment, would probably afford our countrymen as fair an idea of the original as they are ever likely to see. Certain it is, that Mr Naylor has not improved upon it.
If our readers think, that in the samples we have given of Mr Naylor's beauties, we have not sufficiently brought forward some of the more striking peculiarities of the Cockney school, we shall meet this complaint by presenting them with the subjoined anthology, the fragrance of which we think will satisfy their highest anticipations.
"The first in consequence at _court_, As foremost in the public _thought_."
"Your cap and gloves you've left in _pawn_, Thus adding ribaldry to _scorn_."
"What visitors had been? they _tell her_ How Reynard call'd, and said, 'nice _fellow_.'"
"Malkin should fall! and now the _fork_ By Martin turn'd to toma_hawk_."
"No sooner had the foe with_drawn_ To howl around the priest for_lorn_."
"Besides, he must have more than _thought once_ Upon the very vast _importance_."
"Of solemn asses half-a-_score_, Who kick, when tickled with a _straw_!"
"I left him trapp'd, and then made _sheer off_: His sufferings you can't form _idea of_."
"From underneath the frame I _draw_ The pin that propp'd it: with a _roar_."
"Their eggs upon a heap of _straw_, Then loitering hindermost, the _more_."
"When it was bruited round the _court_ How Reynard was by greybeard _brought_."
"Grimalkin there one eye had _lost_, His scalp from Bruin's head been _forced_."
"With any thing, in short, to _fasten_ Guilt on him--burglary--e'en _arson_!"
"Than at the words the Queen, _alarm'd_, Nigh swoon'd before her fears were _calm'd_."
"The son dishonour'd: not a _straw_ It weigh'd with him, to think how _sore_."
"There dwelt my father; him they _sought_, And plotted, whilst they soak'd his _port_."
"To practise after my pa_pa_-- Through life my light and exem_plar_!"
"Another life to lead he's _sworn_: And will to-morrow at the _dawn_."
"Then, turning to the Queen, _besought_ Her majesty in merry _sport_."
"Quoth Reynard, as with sudden _thought_ Before the portal stopping _short_."
"We have so many a sally-_port_, And _cul-de-sac_, we can't be _caught_."
"Send far and near the heralds _forth_, By blast of trump to tell my _wrath_."
"At Rome, I on our banker _draw_, And when that's gone, I send for _more_."
"That none dared venture! This he _saw_ And felt his pluck return once _more_."
"But I've no _claws_ And therefore am not fit for _wars_."
"By envy eaten up, they _saw_ Me prosper; looking all _before_."
"And ever, when they walk'd _abroad_ Each arm'd with hunting-whip and _cord_."
If any of our readers doubt the authenticity of some of the rhymes above set down, we are willing that they should buy the book, as we have done, and ascertain for themselves.
Merciful as we are by nature, and growing more and more so every day by age, we yet feel that the enormities we have now denounced are beyond endurance. Such poetry as this, neither gods, men, nor booksellers should tolerate; and with the highest respect for the very excellent publishers who have assisted in the birth of this production, and to whom we owe so many useful and admirable contributions to knowledge and literature, we do venture humbly to submit, that their peculiar duty makes them somewhat more responsible for what is thus brought forth, than ordinary obstetrical practitioners can be for what they may help into the world. There is no reason that such a bantling should be born at all, and at least we would recommend the continuance of gestation for nine times the Horatian period. Seriously speaking, we always regret to miss the general security which the title-page should give us, that in what we buy, we shall have something for our money. A bad or inferior book may, inadvertently, issue from the most respectable quarter. But when a work is ushered into the light with such pomp and pageantry of paper, printing, and getting up, as are here lavished, we hold that the public have a right to expect that it has received the imprimatur of some discerning judge, and to enforce the implied warranty that the inside, as well as the outside, is a merchantable commodity in the market of Parnassus.
But the publisher's part of it is the least of the evil. It is obvious that the natives of Cockneyland are forgetting themselves. A new generation has sprung up that do not remember the castigations bestowed on their fathers of yore, and which for a time kept them in tolerable subjection. A young Londoner, who happens to have enthusiasm, or industry, or information, on a particular subject, may deserve commendation for the laudable direction of his private studies; but is he, therefore, entitled to _haspire_ to write, and not to write merely, but to write poetry, and to disfigure a venerable old poem under pretence of reproducing it? That is a different question, which needs to be seriously and decidedly dealt with. This is not the first time, within a brief period, that we have been compelled to make an example of similar delinquencies; and, as sure as the crutch is in yonder corner, it shall not be the last, if the nuisance be not speedily and completely abated.
THE AMERICANS AND THE ABORIGINES
A TALE OF THE SHORT WAR. PART II.